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“I…c-can’t hear…you…”
She lay just out of my reach.  I strained beyond my limits and felt my muscles burn as though in a furnace.
“Sarah!  Hold on!”
She slipped a little further and I cried out in despair.
Looking back I could see the others.  They were vainly attempting to hold back a massive creature.  The legendary monster roared and knocked half of them down with one swipe.  I turned back to Sarah and stretched out again.  Her hand was just inches away.
“God damnit!  Please!  I don’t want to lose you…”
“W-where…I…help…”
The rocks crumbled a little more and her hand slipped further from my reach.
My vision grew watery as tears flooded my eyes.  I gave my all one last time and screamed in agony as those last few inches taunted me.
“I’m…s-scared…”
I had done all I could.  Everything was pulling against me.  I did the only thing that was left.  I spoke.
“Sarah…do you remember our promise?”
“”Wh-what?”
“Our Promise!!”
“The…flowers…”
“I’ll meet you there.  Wait for me!”
She fell and there was nothing I could do.
©2006-2010 ~InfernoVahn
:iconinfernovahn:

Author's Comments

This one's based off myself actually. Of course this didn't happen, but something like it did (minus the monster etc). Tried to go for an anonymous feel for this piece. Put it together yourself.

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:iconnaiomi-chan:
That so happened in real life. I bet you fight monsters everyday, jk. I like it, its..ominous.

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Peace, Love and Happiness
:iconinfernovahn:
Oh yes, fighting monsters rocks!

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I am Infection, I am Hostage, I am Acropolis, I am Deviant, I am Awe, You Are Forever, I am Alive, I am Gasmask, I am Vigil, You Are Eternity, I am Legion
:iconspitfire06:
i like it.. but its a clif hanger.. what happens to Sarah?

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spits a pirate :pirate: argg mateey
:iconinfernovahn:
That's for you to decide. I tried to leave it that way.

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I am Infection, I am Hostage, I am Acropolis, I am Deviant, I am Awe, You Are Forever, I am Alive, I am Gasmask, I am Vigil, You Are Eternity, I am Legion
:iconspitfire06:
nicee :D

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spits a pirate :pirate: argg mateey
:iconlonersoul96:
LS: Nice one! Really deep and touching.
:iconinfernovahn:
Thanks!

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I am Infection, I am Hostage, I am Acropolis, I am Deviant, I am Awe, You Are Forever, I am Alive, I am Gasmask, I am Vigil, You Are Eternity, I am Legion
:iconlonersoul96:
LS: Noiproblem! Nice new avi!
:iconkumiko-1991:
omgosh thats so sweet..i'm actually crying now...you lost someone you loved before, huh? O_o....

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HOLY HELL!
:iconinfernovahn:
Yeah...it isn't fun, but life moves on, I guess.

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I am Infection, I am Hostage, I am Acropolis, I am Deviant, I am Awe, You Are Forever, I am Alive, I am Gasmask, I am Vigil, You Are Eternity, I am Legion

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